Wednesday, April 16, 2008

Don't Let Go Poem

This will be the last one, I think. Unless I find more, or write more. This I also wrote two years ago.

Don't Let Go

Don't let go,
Don't give up on me,
I'd be lost in the tides of corruption and apathy.

Keep squeezing my hand,
Don't loosen your grip,
The world's current is getting stronger, and I'm afraid I might slip.

My body has gone numb,
I'm crying in agony,
You know yourself: you're the only one who can save me.

You've always been there for me,
But now I need you more than ever-
The connection between us can never be severed.

Same as always. I think I may need to tweak this a little, and choose between either staying completely metaphorical, or about an actual river... whatever. Consider this a rough draft; I may change this later.